http://deductionmaster.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] deductionmaster.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] cloned 2009-05-04 06:59 am (UTC)

Can I just say how much I <3 this? I truly loved Kal's nervousness and the way you showed Kon's insecurities in the environment he's in. And, goodness...him looking down at the Earth. Everything about this just seriously struck an emotional chord with me and I absolutely loved every word.

Really beautifully done. :)
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